You came and left,
Changed me for the best.
I’ll forget you,
If sun rises in the west.
Is it easy for you ?
To keep me off your mind,
I can’t see you going,
I wish I would be blind.
My heart,my love,
Don’t let my heartbeats go,
Or just go anywhere,
Don’t ever let me know.
How those lucky days,
Lost and gone so fast.
Your love was only mine,
But you make all of it past.
I’m still waiting,
Where you left me alone,
Without you my girl,
I cannot move on.
If you ever come back,
That’ll be my fate.
Honey I’ll keep loving you,
Don’t be so late.
hmm.. quite impressive...keep on writing...
ReplyDeletehmm .. keep it up ... [:)]
ReplyDeleteu reminded me john denver [:P]
good one altaf....
ReplyDelete@Thanx to all......[:)]
ReplyDelete@Presenjit da........[;)]
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ReplyDeleteawsum poem.....waiting for upcuming poems
ReplyDeleteawesome poem bro...keep it up
ReplyDeleteyour every word seems soo true altaf...its amazing..again..
ReplyDeletereally awesome...
ReplyDeletenice poem bro!!!kp it up!
ReplyDeleteits good bro..but its worthless if ur thought does not reach her...ur words can't touch her soul..say those to her...for whom u r writing..feeling the pain tell her she is pain and she is the only way to keep u out of it...lot let ur thought strangled in pages....its all there..all u have to do...is DO!!!!!
ReplyDeleteyeah, as 'nil' said try to send your feelings to ur beloved....keep it up bro
ReplyDelete@Nil and Anthony
ReplyDeleteI'm trying so hard......But I dont know how much it will touch to her heart.....But I'll not stop ever to tell her that how much I love her......I'll do anything to be with her.....And this time I'm not gonna fail....Not anymore......It's my promise.
Lets see.....what destiny will bring for me.
destiny does not bring nething...we only give diff directions to ur destiny follow ur heart....u will find ur destiny ..........(in mah opinion)
ReplyDeleteYou are right bro.....But its not true for everyone.....Coz sometimes love's not worth anymore until your beloved will understand your words......Love can move the mountains and cross the oceans.....But the one you love will not care for you a single moment if she does not feel the same for you.
ReplyDeletehey itz really a nice1.........but as i suggested u last day......do follow it.....all b best 4m me.....n yeah waiting for d next one
ReplyDeleteBeautiful....
ReplyDeletethanx sreya and swarnendu......:-)
ReplyDelete@sreya I'll try......
So sweet... I wish someone would write such lovely poems for me... I really don't know why she is still not coming back to you.. didn't you make her read it???
ReplyDelete@Amrita
ReplyDeleteshe read all the poems.....but still these poems are unable to touch her heart.....and its natural coz she did'nt feel the same like I do.....dnt wori......its just a beginning......I have to walk for miles.....and I'll.
wow!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletecan't b described in words........
Altaf what ur taking with food, let me know so that i will eat same and come up with poems like this. Good work....
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