Day and day broken hearts,
And broken dreams to see.
What are the missing parts,
Which puts hell into me?
When I see the broken star,
I close my eyes and pray.
Wished for the rain to fall,
And washed my pain away.
But nothing makes me free,
You’re trapped inside me.
I’m begging not to leave,
Standing on my knees.
Still you’re walked away,
Left incomplete my wish.
No regrets or promises,
You give nothing to me.
If you ever feel so bad,
You can come back to me.
In your eyes I can see,
You’re still in love with me.
well composed...
ReplyDeleteas usual a beautifully expressed poem written 4m heart............keep it up yaar
ReplyDeleteThanx Yaar!!!!!!!1
ReplyDeleteawesome dear fantastic which I hav ever seen love poems.......
ReplyDeletesound of silence!!!!!......bhalolaga janalam
ReplyDeletesorry yaar im stealing its too good....
ReplyDeletebest one..eva u v written...feelings do grow actually..words say so.....one thing i am sure abt ....and that is....may be she is faraway..may be she is silent..may be she is not intrstd in all these suffs..but after sme yrs..she will look into her old emails..or profile to check these links....and her mind will say.." wish i listened to these few times b4"
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ReplyDeleteThanx bro You're right....I also think that it wont be worthless at all....At the end she have to give the proper worth to this words....But the truth is that the feelings are over than the words which cant be explained.....I'll wait...We all are waiting....Hope the time will come before my last breath!!!!!
Kaun hai wo khusnasib yaar jiske pyar me tumhara yeh haal hai?
ReplyDeleteMujhe to kuch nahi pata hai,dosto se chupana nahi chahiye.
btw sari poems bahot achi hai, take care.
man i realli was not aware that we have such a gem in our clg...keep it up dear, i m not that fond of love poems and lovelogy but ur poem is different ....different from other love lullabies
ReplyDeletepictures are nice!:)
ReplyDeletetouching poem dude!
ReplyDeletekeep it going..really nice...