
Your smile delights my day,
Shows me the heaven’s way.
One touch of your's in the rain,
Vanished all my pain.
Do you know, oh my life,
What I feel inside.
These feelings can’t be shown,
You left to become unknown.
That I was one for you,
But still I’m going through.
You taught me how to love,
How could not you love.
Oh dear, make it right,
I’m tired of this fight.
Don’t have to shed a tear,
I’ll beat all your fear.
In my arms you will find,
A love eternal blind.
Let me cross the all distance,
Keep faith, atleast once.
verg gud... keep it up!!!!
ReplyDeletenice dude very nice indeed!!!guess she will read it soon....
ReplyDeleteThanx Deb and Nil(Sayantan)........[:-)]
ReplyDeleteAnd god bless you for helping me to remove the grammatical mistakes......[:-P]
@Nil(Sayantan)
ReplyDeleteyeah bro hope she will read it soon....otherwise it will be worthless to write.
its amazing...
ReplyDeleteNice work dude :)
ReplyDeletenice one ... nice passion .. keep it up ... :)
ReplyDeletebal.....taf!!
ReplyDeleteengg. se poet ban gaya......@#$%#%@
really well written...
ReplyDeleteour nxt gen Praveen Kumar
praveen kumar is a cricket player when did he start writing poem????????????
ReplyDelete@altaf..oye mention not ji!!!!
ReplyDelete@Nil she is talking about PK bhaiya......
ReplyDeleteAltaf bhaiya is always a magician with his words.... Whther its his Shayris or his Poems.... Great guy.........
ReplyDeleteThanx yaar.........Aur tu mujhe bhaiya kab se bolne laga......:-P
ReplyDeleteWell work altaf....a wonderful creation!!
ReplyDeletegreat n amazing poem really u did a great job n really heart touching words....... clap clap clap..... :)
ReplyDeleteclap!!!!clap!!!clap!!!!clap!!!! :) :) :) :)
ReplyDeletethanx to all.........:-)
ReplyDeleteMake her read the poems Altaf...and fast!!!
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ReplyDeleteall of them are very nice..... keep it up....
ReplyDeleteGood work...:)
ReplyDeletefiddling with romantic words is bread and butter for him.
ReplyDeletenice1
keep it up