Sunday, August 1, 2010

The Heaven’s way


Your smile delights my day,
Shows me the heaven’s way.
One touch of your's in the rain,
Vanished all my pain.
Do you know, oh my life,
What I feel inside.
These feelings can’t be shown,
You left to become unknown.
That I was one for you,
But still I’m going through.
You taught me how to love,
How could not you love.
Oh dear, make it right,
I’m tired of this fight.
Don’t have to shed a tear,
I’ll beat all your fear.
In my arms you will find,
A love eternal blind.
Let me cross the all distance,
Keep faith, atleast once.

23 comments:

  1. nice dude very nice indeed!!!guess she will read it soon....

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  2. Thanx Deb and Nil(Sayantan)........[:-)]
    And god bless you for helping me to remove the grammatical mistakes......[:-P]

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  3. @Nil(Sayantan)
    yeah bro hope she will read it soon....otherwise it will be worthless to write.

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  4. nice one ... nice passion .. keep it up ... :)

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  5. bal.....taf!!
    engg. se poet ban gaya......@#$%#%@

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  6. really well written...
    our nxt gen Praveen Kumar

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  7. praveen kumar is a cricket player when did he start writing poem????????????

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  8. @Nil she is talking about PK bhaiya......

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  9. Altaf bhaiya is always a magician with his words.... Whther its his Shayris or his Poems.... Great guy.........

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  10. Thanx yaar.........Aur tu mujhe bhaiya kab se bolne laga......:-P

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  11. Well work altaf....a wonderful creation!!

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  12. great n amazing poem really u did a great job n really heart touching words....... clap clap clap..... :)

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  13. clap!!!!clap!!!clap!!!!clap!!!! :) :) :) :)

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  14. Make her read the poems Altaf...and fast!!!

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  16. all of them are very nice..... keep it up....

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  17. fiddling with romantic words is bread and butter for him.
    nice1
    keep it up

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